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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-04-04 11:10 AM


The Can Can isn’t much of a dance
Just a way to see a young girl’s underpants.

She’d smack him silly with a rubber chicken,
Before he could complain she smacked him agin.

She couldn’t speak the language she’d only giggle
She couldn’t dance but my oh my could she jiggle

He juggled seven knives finely sharpen,
The juggled the books and was sent to the pen.

The advertisements called her the song bird of the south
Her voice made you want to put worms in her mouth

He told jokes designed to put a smile on your face
He always went last because he’d clear out the place.

Moolg
just to show I can write other topics too



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-04-04 11:12 AM



You ransomed my random silliness with moolg cleverness....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-04-04 01:26 PM


silliness becomes you at times...
*s
M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-04-04 02:11 PM


Hey Gloom!  I like you silly!
This is a way cool write...
especially since I grew up in a show biz family.  (Am still in one too.)
It was nothing unusual to have these kinds of entertainers visiting our home day and night, and juggling or performing magic
out on the front lawn..
I really really love this,
as it is up my alley, so to speak.
You brought a smile to my face by
bringing back a ton of memories...
therefore I am claiming this
and into my library it goes!  
BIG HUGS!!
~Nancy~


*bump*

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