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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-04-04 09:03 AM


A little note - Marsha's challenge

A little note; that's all she wrote
Just a little number
Ten digits and I quote.

O please call me; please come to me.
As I dream in slumber
I need your company.

And so I met her hot desire
Called her little number
And went into her fire.

Once inside, we took a ride
Beyond all galaxies
My joy I cannot hide.

Her lightning danced by stroke of chance
How could I be her choice?
As I found sweet romance,

In a little note.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Springs, Florida
April 4, 2002


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1 posted 2002-04-04 09:42 AM


Newell, you rascal

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2 posted 2002-04-04 10:49 AM


Hehe cute cute


Jenn

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3 posted 2002-04-04 11:06 AM


Yeh! Interloper, just couldn't resist.

((Interloper))
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4 posted 2002-04-04 11:06 AM


Hi Jenn, glad you liked.

((Jenn))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-04-04 02:50 PM


Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful a perfect response to the challenge. This was just a little challenge between Krissy and I, but Iā€™m so glad others have joined in. This one of yours flows like liquid fire over the page. I love it, as always your writing is excellent

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy




To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79



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6 posted 2002-04-04 02:58 PM


Thank you, Marsha, darling girl. Your words flow like sweet honey into my heart.
I love you, xo


((Marsha))
-newell

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7 posted 2002-04-04 04:49 PM


Newell,
I think I'd better get a taxi straight to your place ...to help you with that cold shower. Whew!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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8 posted 2002-04-04 05:09 PM


Ahh! Kethrey, what a delightful thought!

((Kethrey))
-newell

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(sigh) This is indeed very passionate and filled with loves sincerity and flame, sweet friend, this is a wonderful reply to the challenge! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-04-04 07:44 PM


Truly nice Newell and I loved Keths reply. Haha looks like you need a cold shower. Lovely poem. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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11 posted 2002-04-04 08:19 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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12 posted 2002-04-04 08:20 PM


Hi floria,

Yeh! I'm sure it would take at least two of you to hold me under the cold water. LOL...

((floria))
-newell

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13 posted 2002-04-04 08:54 PM


I hear drums in the backround of this one Newell! ThisDiamond
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14 posted 2002-04-04 08:59 PM


Wow! I sure wish there were some drums. Seems no one but me wants to keep dancing.

((ThisDiamond))
-newel

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15 posted 2002-04-04 09:35 PM


This is quite delicious, Newell.
Sandra

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16 posted 2002-04-04 09:50 PM


Thanks, Sandra. Glad you enjoy dining with me.

((Sandra))
-newell

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