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can’t get the tears flushed
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can’t get the tears flushed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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past tense disturbs the wind and I feel the still breeze your leave has left me singed yet I feel the air freeze had then been smitten bad now the past makes me sad I try to keep away not to get in pain’s way frostbites of memory are chilling my blood flow our’s a frozen story uprooted, lacking glow. once bitten two times shy still here wondering why I plead myself to hush yet, can’t get the tears flushed ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, frostbites of memory are chilling my blood flow our’s a frozen story uprooted, lacking glow. Very well done, enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"frostbites of memory" "once bitten two times shy" Have I ever mentioned that I am going to steal phrases from you  I love it! Well done! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
~frostbites of memory are chilling my blood flow our’s a frozen story uprooted, lacking glow.~ Ahhh I know this all too well. You've expressed it beautifully. I could really feel the sadness behind it. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ 'past tense disturbs the wind and I feel the still breeze your leave has left me singed yet I feel the air freeze' I could feel this ... what descriptive phrasing~ Very, very touching~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Only time can ease the hurt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I hope soon your tears are replaced by thos ethat sparkle with warmth and hope and joy! (sigh) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir Iyer - I can feel your sadness in this write. Peace walk with you my friend... BC |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ahhhhhhhh you guys are such a wonderful bunch... thank you all muchly... Regards, Sudhir |
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