I can see within her sparkles

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Open Poetry #19

I can see within her sparkles

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-04-03 10:52 PM

I can see within her the sparkles
the time yet to pass
a simple unguarded smile
provoked to laughter by monkeys

a child is a combination
of dreams and hard work
of realization and acceptance
of a love greater than your own

every moment spent
is never enough
for a father
who loves his little girl

A real man

kisses his children goodnight

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-04-03 10:58 PM

This is one of the rarest of gems. Wonderful.
ThisDiamond

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-04-05 04:53 AM

very well said!

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-04-06 11:49 AM

This is sweet and so true. I like it. And I love your signature.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (04-06-2002 11:50 AM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-04-06 11:54 AM

Loved this James..and yes i love the signature too...so true

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-04-06 11:55 AM

Ahhhh......awe......

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-04-06 11:59 AM

sweet JamesB..*s

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-04-06 01:02 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, this kind of love is indeed so very rare and I only wish every father can love his daughter so much like this! (big hugggssssss) This is sensitive and touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2002-04-06 01:20 PM

JamesBowie...It's so good to see a father so in love with his children. Very bright and wonderful poem expressing that love.

***Ivy Rose

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