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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-04-03 08:13 PM



I want to fall
innocent
into you

quitely

until I learn
the meaning
of your far off
stare

and if you dare

catch me...

~Tier
3/02

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-04-03 08:26 PM


Love the innocence...accept the dare.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-04-03 08:30 PM



Where have you been?  Welcome home...

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-04-03 08:48 PM


Duncan, *wink*

Sunshine, Sorry that I haven't posted in a while, I've been ill. Thank you for the warm welcome back... again! *hugs*

~Tier

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4 posted 2002-04-03 09:07 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, such innocent love shines in these words, sweet friend, I am so happy you have recovered again, we have all missed you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-03 09:18 PM


Ooooh!!  I do love this sooooo!
Welcome back Tier~
Hugs.

Krawdad
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6 posted 2002-04-03 09:20 PM


very enticing and tempting . . .
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7 posted 2002-04-04 11:26 AM


Whoa!  
To think I almost missed this
I LOVE this!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven
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8 posted 2002-04-04 03:27 PM


quote:
I want to fall
innocent
into you

I have a feeling that this would get 6's from the judges my friend. . .

welcome back. . . glad to see that you're feeling better. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-04-04 09:11 PM


Thank you Noah, your comments are always appreciated! *smiles*

Enchantress, Thank you for the welcome back, *hugs*

Krawdad, *blushes* thank you!

Interloper, I'm glad that you like the poem. It's always nice to read your comments on my work! ;-)

Sven, Thank you, my friend! :-)

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