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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-04-03 08:00 PM



salty slaves


I dreamt again
my sought desire
your parted lips
I brought to fire

I plunged into
your waters warm
we rocked and tossed
as in a storm

And when the tide
again arose
we awaked
from our repose

We held on tight
as rolled the waves
bound together
like salty slaves




Kraw'3.19.02





"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (04-04-2002 12:45 AM).]

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-04-03 08:15 PM


*s...enjoyed your movement of words

M

Tiersdin
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east coast
2 posted 2002-04-03 10:30 PM


rythmic and softly sensual...

delicious...

~Tier

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-04-03 10:33 PM


Krawdad,
This is an excellent write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-04-03 10:37 PM


Oh my...yes...love this...sure do!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Balladeer
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5 posted 2002-04-03 10:39 PM


salty slaves...a wonderful phrase, befitting an equally excellent poem
Martie
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6 posted 2002-04-03 10:43 PM


Krawdad

Sometimes it is like that.  Enjoyed seeing the ocean through your eyes.

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