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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-03 04:43 PM


Children Of The Stars
By: Noah Eaton
4/3/02

Did anyone tell you life can be so unfair
Fostered as a child, in a place where even deities weep in despair
Where our desires become caricatures when we are too young to share

Underneath your clothes
I swear you've found a friend
That will never let you go
I see a constellation
You are a star of everything
When you never thought it up at all

And you want to be free
Reach for me
I can see you falling
A new day has begun
Look high up
Somehow we are children of the stars

You see your surroundings as a lost cause antithesis
You say you are some synecdoche of a black hole you have lost yourself in

Underneath your clothes
I swear you've found a friend
That will never let you go
I see a constellation
You are a star of everything
When you never thought it up at all

And you want to be free
Reach for me
I can see you falling
A new day has begun
Look high up
Somehow we are children of the stars

Cheer up, child, you're in good hands
I will make your tears sound spondaic
God, you've found me out there somewhere
I'm just following my lodestar
Chaperoned by my guardian angel

And you want to be free
Reach for me
I can see you falling
A new day has begun
Look high up
Somehow we are children of the stars
And you want to be free
Reach for me
I can see you falling
A new day has begun
Look high up
Somehow we are children of the stars
He loves you
He loves you
Reach for your star now
A new day has begun
A new day has begun
We are children of the stars
His love will not fail you
His love will not fail you
We are children of the stars


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-03-2002 04:54 PM).]

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Suetang
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1 posted 2002-04-03 05:45 PM


Hello Noah

This so so very beautiful and so very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-04-03 05:47 PM


enjoy your read
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3 posted 2002-04-03 07:02 PM


Noah, Noah, this is soooo  ....gosh for once I dont have words. So heartfelt. So lovely. Children of the stars. It says so much, and it says so much about you, the person who wrote this. Wonderful words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-04-03 08:31 PM


Noah my dear, this is fabulous! It could be a song! I wish I could write good stuff like this.

luv
RP

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5 posted 2002-04-03 08:47 PM


...Exquisite!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2002-04-03 08:53 PM


pass the tissues please! *smiles*

so very beautiful, Noah...


~Tier

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-04-03 08:56 PM


Oh Noah,
This sparkles!
ThisDiamond

Magicmystery
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8 posted 2002-04-03 10:23 PM


My Dear Noah, What a beautiful poem!!!  It is said somewhere that we are the stuff of stars.  The Creation was an expansion of the universal consciousness we know as God. We are very much all children of the stars.



Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Martie
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9 posted 2002-04-03 10:29 PM


Noah

You have a beautiful heart...and your words are like music.  Loved this!

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-04-04 08:05 AM


you are a beautiful person with a golden heart.....shine on my dear friend, 'cause you always lighten these blue pages.

((hugs))
Charisma

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