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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-04-03 12:49 PM


jph    

the love we shared was real--
please
dont mistake it
for anything less...
but there were things we couldnt
know
without the days spent

and i am grateful
to you
for allowing us
the opportunity
the freedom
of knowing who we are

i am grateful to you
for allowing your heart to meet mine
no matter the outcome

and i want you to know
there is a world that still exists
in the words that we shared
in each poetic verse
that tells our story
a story unafraid
of the world beyond us
we unleashed love
enveloped in risk--
for a little while
we loved
in a space of poetic hue...

you lent moondust to my voice
and whispers were conceived
you sprinkled shivers upon my skin
and poetry was birthed
dripping of dreams and wishes--
you awakened fantasies within me
that i didnt know existed--
ah..what inspiration you lent...

what matter of love
brought us together through the light
of voiceless words
was right--
what face of love we met
could not have been wrong

the love we shared was real...
please dont mistake it
for anything
less...

-dgvarner
3-31-02

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"anger is nothing more than unfulfilled desire.."  -unknown

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-03 12:53 PM


"the love we shared was real...
please dont mistake it
for anything
less..."




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I have missed you and your wonderful words so much lately, sweet friend, it is a delight to see your name here again! (kiss on cheek) May these memories of love always remain held dear to your heart and may it be filled with many more to come! This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-03 02:02 PM


OhDG~

'and i want you to know
there is a world that still exists
in the words that we shared
in each poetic verse
that tells our story
a story unafraid
of the world beyond us
we unleashed love
enveloped in risk--
for a little while
we loved
in a space of poetic hue...

you lent moondust to my voice
and whispers were conceived
you sprinkled shivers upon my skin
and poetry was birthed
dripping of dreams and wishes--
you awakened fantasies within me
that i didnt know existed--
ah..what inspiration you lent...'


Yes ... sweet lady ...
it was and is very real~
*BIG HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Dee
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3 posted 2002-04-03 04:24 PM


dg, its good to find you here again. And what beautiful words too.
Some things we just have to go for, take the risk and see what survives. I'm sure it was real, sometimes there is just too much to cope with.
Hugs to you,
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

vandana
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4 posted 2002-04-03 05:49 PM


enjoyed
Jeffrey E. Osborne
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5 posted 2002-04-03 10:21 PM


You couldn't have said it any better than this! Good choice of words and well written. Excellent job, my dear dittydogg (heh heh)
dgvarner
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6 posted 2002-04-03 11:16 PM


thank you sweet NOAH..
miss MARGIE..i thank you too my friend..
DEE..thank you..its good to be back! ..i believe it WAS real--i dont know how to love only half-way...good to hear from you...
VANDANA..glad you enjoyed..thanks for reading..
JEFFREY..and good to hear from you too my friend!..thank you rascal..

hugs, g

Krawdad
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7 posted 2002-04-04 12:53 PM


Hi dg!
Hey, this is really neat.  Well said, too.  I know this.  I like it a lot.  
Thanks for sharing.
e
      
    

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-04-04 02:26 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Parker
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9 posted 2002-04-04 01:58 PM


I like this whole write.... you know I do..

It just touches me.. and oh I love to be touched...

Reality has to be felt, and I wounldn't have traded it for anything less.

Parker

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-04-04 02:05 PM


I like all the lines...every word....it is one wonderful piece!

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2002-04-04 02:49 PM


very beautiful, it is hard to get 'here' in life and look back and know it was a good thing.....you have penned this wonderfully
dgvarner
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12 posted 2002-04-09 01:04 PM


KRAW..thanks for reading me friend     
JAMESMICHAEL..glad you enjoyed!  thanks
PARKER..i'm so glad you liked this one..     yes, i know how you like to be touched...its the least i can do....   ...thank you parker...
CHARISMA..thank you so much!
JELLYBEANS..well said..it IS difficult sometimes to realize that what you did was right for the circumstances...that it was ok...     thanks for reading..

hugs, g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (04-09-2002 01:06 PM).]

EagleOne
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13 posted 2002-04-21 12:36 PM


I agree my friend, you can't half love someone. Excellent write, I guess in the end you can only follow your heart...and hope. Take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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14 posted 2002-12-31 03:52 AM


kinda sad, but still accepting
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