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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-04-02 11:43 PM


As the icy cold kingdom of winter is dethroned
the revolution of springtime thaws reclaim
despoiled lands, rendered bleak and mottled by
deadening frosts and hard freezing rain that sucked
life from the very ground beneath us

A break in the clouds renders sustaining warmth
to the bone weary travelers, tired of huddling in
cold shelters from the frigid fangs of wind born
chills, stalking the land like angry frost giants
jealous of the warmth within our bodies

As I look to the passing crowds, the familiar
grimaces and squinting eyes have been changed
into friendly smiles, resplendent in the sunshine
that beckons the reclusive winter hermits
to bask within it's amber gaze

This is the time for forgetting the woes and laments
sustained within winters dreary fold, preparing
for the coming of summer, and beholding all the
gifts of nature magically retrieved from the maw
of a now passing season

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1 posted 2002-04-03 01:00 PM


"This is the time for forgetting the woes and laments
sustained within winters dreary fold, preparing
for the coming of summer, and beholding all the
gifts of nature magically retrieved from the maw
of a now passing season"




(smiles) Oh James, the fresh breath of spring shines from your lips in these words, sweet friend, I too always find spring to almost mark a renaissance of joy and hope in everyones hearts, for sometimes the winter too makes me feel doleful! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, may this spring offer you great gifts and smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-04 07:57 AM


I like the last stanza most.....beautiful written.

Charisma

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