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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-04-02 11:43 PM


I once struggled to be like the rest,
I once decided I would be like them,
I once deicided I  wanted to be the best,
I once decided I would never go down that path again.

I then realized it best to be me,
I then realized they where not so great,
I then realized winning isnt everything, youll see,
I then realized, I was far too late.

I had already begun to be what I was before,
I had already begun to become everything I hate,
I had already begun to make people pleed, "no more",
I had already begun to become a snake.

But now I rise from my ashes,reborn,
But now when I look in a mirror i only see love,
But now noone I know has felt my scorn,
But now I am a dove.

What I was,
What Ive done,
What Ive seen,
What Ive felt,
It's Over



The man of few words...

[This message has been edited by TriXter (04-02-2002 11:44 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-03 09:03 AM




(big hugggsssssss) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, and though it may be over, you have a lifetime of wonderful things ahead for you and you will find much happiness that will last forever and will stand timeless in authenticity! (smiles) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-04-04 04:06 AM


TriXter,
look ahead I say, shed that skin be new within and learn to reach and pray
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-04-04 05:23 AM


yaknow TriXter, I must say I can relate very well to this one and I'm glad I stopped to read it. It sounds like something I would have written about my relationship and my job and my life here. I will be starting a new life soon. Thanks for sharing.
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