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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-04-02 10:54 PM



They'd weigh your produce in two
or look alike as twins often do;
marvel at the synchrony of their hands
customer care is on top demand.

if born attached, clothes must match
but when apart, each is free to depart;
same interests, inate language works between
same shape, exercise and they both look lean.

special senses, aware for each other's needs
they come together to prevent unwanted bleeds;
they act alike, identical ones often do
fool the public, which one is true?

if born attached, their secrets may hatch
at the cash working as a match
marvel at the synchrony of their ways
curious to see, fraternity on display.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-02-2002 10:55 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-03 08:59 AM




(sigh) I too know this kind of feeling so well, sweet friend, it too would marvel me if for instance there was a twin of me and I learned of him and saw him before my very eyes, it truly is a miracle in science and human behavior! (big hugggssssss) This is powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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2 posted 2002-04-04 04:02 AM


ecvrivan,
is this double the trouble double the fun
or joined at the breast the two are one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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