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When your heart colors paradise...
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When your heart colors paradise... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
When your heart colors paradise such beauty does unveil for instance when you take a glimpse at a rainbow in the sky while you lay atop the perfumed scent of petals that blanket meadow grass this vision seen before your eyes is heavenly at very best but nothing can compare to when you gaze into the eyes of that special someone you hold dear when each new morning you awaken together in embrace of comfort, strength, and adoring love...  ~coco~[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-02-2002 05:37 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That sounds so very good. 1derful  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You're da best Interloper... Muaah on cheekzSweetPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, the paradise of love fills your heart and sings with happiness! (kiss on cheek) May you always wake up and see your love of your life before your very eyes smiling, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet CocoBaci, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I agree...looking through the eyes of love makes all things look better...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mistletoe ((noah)), thank you sweetie for your adorable reply brings out bright smiles in Coco ya know... James, thank you very very much 4reading this poem and 4commenting like you have is beary much appreciated sweetie... Hugs2u2PoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . the color of love. . . wonderful PoetFriend Coco. . . wonderful indeed. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It sounds a beautiful place to be. Well done, Coco. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
but nothing can compare to when you gaze into the eyes of that special someone you hold dear so true Coco..enjoyed your lovely words..nice to see you again..hugss ~Victoria
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, Cat, Vic... thank you3so very much4taking a peak at this page and4your sweet comments you've made... ManyHugs2u3SweetPoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is there in the eyes that paradise is found. Such a nice poem CocoBaci. (I love that name btw) Sounds like a hot toddy with whipped cream!! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-03-2002 11:39 PM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya Blues, ya got me all smiling at your reply and I thank you sweetPoetFriend... Hugs2u... *~coco~* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Coco Sure does sound like a most special place to be...with love. Hugs! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetieMartie, I'm so very happy2see you peak thru here and ya know that my heart hugz u rite back dearPoetFriend... Muaah on cheekz2u *~coco~* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
coco you are serene |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
nothing compares... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhhhh Ohhhhhh Ohhhhhh Walt, you're such a sweetheart ya know that and bigHugs2UandYourFamilySweetie... Duncan, muaah on cheeks2uDearPoetFriend thank you4taking a moment2let me know you took a peak at this lil poem...*~coco~* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ahh yessss this is what I like... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but nothing can compare to when you gaze into the eyes of that special someone you hold dear Amen. *S* This is beautiful, Coco... I really enjoyed it! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CocoBaci - your words are just as beautiful as when I've read them before... BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DearSweetCharisma, thank you PoetFriend4browsing thru this page and ya know you're in my heart always dearFriend SweetieSuthern, you're precious and I thank you very much4your reply BillBillBill, it's been a lil while SweetBill, and ya know what that means 2big Hugs4MyPoetFriendBill and thanx4taking a glance at this poem... Muaah on cheekz2u3PoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If I had to choose one person to describe it ... I don't think there could be a better poet for the job than you. Tranquility and total comfort come from the vision of your words. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
((( MARK ))), my goodness, what a sweet surprise I see b4 my eyes finding you dearPoetFriend have passed thru this page and shared with me such kindness in your comments... I thank you from the bottom of my heart... *~Coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-04-2002 11:09 PM).] |
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