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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Before Thought […thought. aHa!] but in thinking once before, concluded I, that mayhap having spent youth’s bent it came now, time to don lady’s shady weave of looming hat to grow old, in graced line embrace refine, let grow stolid, mine mind wear pasteled palette of floral whiff wave hands in air as if pantomiming ghosts’ regale of yester’s year before… before you… neither asking, accessing then, allowing unconditionally with tumultuous acclamation two souls commingle to souls in tingle never more single now, before… before you leave… do know, you converged this mind surely |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Wow, I love that past tense appeal you placed in this poem then reflecting on how things can change in an instant with the words and examples you create! (kiss on cheek) This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just when you thought, eh my friend?? wonderfully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
who would have thought.... nicely done my friend |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
converged with your mind comingled with your tingle joined in special ways Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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