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Charisma
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0 posted 2002-04-02 01:09 PM


    

Ingenious

Thread by thread woven
fragile but flexible strength
ingenious sticky web
spider trap lures naive prey
conserved by silky layers



Charisma


02/04/02



~*Theresia~*  


[This message has been edited by Charisma (04-02-2002 01:15 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-02 01:13 PM


Love it Charisma..nice to see you again..hugss.. enjoyed

                  ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-04-02 01:20 PM


One of my favorite forms.
I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-04-02 01:25 PM



Silk entwined thinking
"Shall I keep it for supper?
Or breakfast in bed?"

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4 posted 2002-04-02 01:39 PM


one of my favorite forms....this was great!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2002-04-02 02:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love how you write words inspired by such gorgeous pictures, this is a wonderful poem filled with natures beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you always weave such magical webs of words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-04-04 07:29 AM


Thank you all for your kind replies, I truly appreciated them very much....love you all.

((Hugs)))
Charisma

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