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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-02 12:45 PM




At Last

At last you've come along
Your love the most beautiful song
My lonely days are over because of you
Chains broken, a happiness I never knew

At last skies are blue above
As we rejoice in our love
My heart wrapped up in the magic of your kiss
Together we share this magical bliss

I found a dream in your eyes
My heart beats with yours in heavenly sighs
The night I found you
All my dreams came true

A dream that I can now call my own
I've been watching this love and how it has grown
Starting out as a friendship, deep and real
You've made my tears fade, helped me to heal

When you smile at me, a spell is cast
I've found the love of my life at last
Here we are in heaven, on clouds of white
As our hearts shine together in the sweetness of the light


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-02-2002 12:47 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-04-02 12:52 PM


Awright!
1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Opeth
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2 posted 2002-04-02 01:04 PM


It sounds like you have found your soulmate.
These words expressed your feelings with a fresh touch of honesty.

Verve
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3 posted 2002-04-02 01:18 PM




*Sighs*

Lovely ...



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4 posted 2002-04-02 02:51 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we are all so happy for you and I hope this love lasts forever in your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) Your lovely words always make me smile and daydream happily, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-02 07:35 PM


A dream that I can now call my own
I've been watching this love and how it has grown
Starting out as a friendship, deep and real
You've made my tears fade, helped me to heal


beautiful amy.....just beautiful....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

vandana
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6 posted 2002-04-02 07:40 PM


enjoyed
Poet deVine
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7 posted 2002-04-02 10:21 PM


Beautiful! I hope this is from real life because it's so full of joy!!!!
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8 posted 2002-04-02 10:30 PM


A ton or two of love and devotion here in
these words Amy...Nicely said..

Saunni
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9 posted 2002-04-02 10:55 PM


Aimster, this is absolutely beautiful! You said so much in thi one. I love it! It's beyond words!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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10 posted 2002-04-03 09:04 AM


Amy darling lil sister of my heart, this is awesome, I mean it, this is an incredible piece of writing, utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of love and light

The whole poem is spectacular in its execution however these lines positively scream class to me

At last skies are blue above
As we rejoice in our love
My heart wrapped up in the magic of your kiss
Together we share this magical bliss

I found a dream in your eyes
My heart beats with yours in heavenly sighs
The night I found you
All my dreams came true
Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it .  You know I love this poem, purely perfect poetry

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Kethry
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11 posted 2002-04-04 03:58 AM


Amy, I'm so happy I got to read about your new love and I'm so happy for you. *Kiss on the cheek* for I wouldn't want your love to get jealous.
Beautiful work.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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