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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-04-02 11:45 AM


Curved Contents

think round
pliant
yielding

lean mean harsh
machines do not invite

and streamlined has its place

but wouldn’t you rather
see

content curved,
carved with a spoon

an invitation

to warm


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Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-04-02 11:50 AM


my eyes see better
when viewing soft rounded sights
turn to the left please

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Elizabeth Cor
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2 posted 2002-04-02 01:01 PM


I agree, completely. ~smile~ I love how what you write it open to a thousand interpretations... here, my first impression is of tight, hard, stickly girls contrasting to the soft inviting hourglass of voluptuous women...

How straight lines are striking and impressive, but the curl of a palm or hip is so warm...

Soleil Noir
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3 posted 2002-04-02 01:05 PM



Interloper, to the left, there you have it...

Elizabeth, I am an admirer of your writings.  Your comment plies well.  Thank you...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-04-02 08:13 PM




(smiles) Wow, you always depict such small things so boldly in your words like we're identifying emotions through a magnifiying glass, sweet friend, I too feel that to envision lines is static and bleak, but to feel curves reveals so much more beauty and reality to a dream and joy! (sigh) This is excelelnt, sweet friend, you always have such talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-02 09:10 PM


OH yes...I do agree with Elizabeth...and
her interpretation...Nicely done SN...very
much so!

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