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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-02 09:39 AM



Smile-Wrinkles

~*Marge Tindal*~

When a memory catches you mid-sentence
writing smile-wrinkles all over your face
That's a moment of special remember
foreverly suspended in place ~

When a fit-of-laughter assails you
filling your heart with pure glee
Fling it to a friend to share
foreverly ~

Caught up in the smile-wrinkles
memories write their own sweet song
So my friend, grab a giggle-note
and merrily sing along ~



*Come on now ... I just know there's a smile in there ...
Fling it to a friend ~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-02 09:46 AM


This message is so true
smiles we wear
are given to share

Smiling Marge thanks
Hope

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2 posted 2002-04-02 09:58 AM


yes, there is and I'm flinging LOL
this is wonderful Marge

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3 posted 2002-04-02 09:27 PM


Hope~
You always leave the nicest poetic reply~
Thank you~

SEA~
I'm hoping it'll get flung even farther~
Thanks gal~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-04-03 08:18 AM


Very nice, Marge! I'll fling my smiles, too.
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5 posted 2002-04-03 02:15 PM


I got those! I got those! People say I must smile a lot...I guess wrinkles are not so bad.
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6 posted 2002-04-03 02:18 PM


Marge,
I was following and missed those smile-wrinkles from this angle. But heard the giggle and got a few smile-wrinkles of my own.

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7 posted 2002-04-03 02:31 PM


SmartChick~
Well alright gal !  We'll have miles and miles of smiles~

Dixie~
Tee-Hee ... reminds me of why my kids like my little 'crows feet'~

Larry~
LOL ... you *smile-stalker* you !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2002-04-03 04:34 PM


I'm singing,,lalalala I'm singing. La lalalal great one Marge. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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9 posted 2002-04-03 04:41 PM


You gave me lots of smiles with this one, Marge. I am smiling heaps today

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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10 posted 2002-04-04 10:07 AM


Marge

You made a few jump onto my face...I swear they weren't there yesterday.  Hugs!

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11 posted 2002-04-04 10:16 AM


Floria~
I hear you~  Now fling it to another friend~

Dee~
Alrighteeeee~

MartieSis~
Tee-Hee~
You've made my day ~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~



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12 posted 2002-04-04 10:20 AM


Gee, a massive fling at Passions

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13 posted 2002-04-04 12:42 PM


Marge:  This is cute and who cares about wrinkles if they come from smiling?

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2002-04-04 01:43 PM


thank you for sharing Marge, you always make me smile

((hugs))
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15 posted 2002-04-04 04:26 PM


Heaven knows I have the wrinkles.... and most of the time I have the smiles... but I don't have enough elasticity in this skin to give a fling? *G* Got any suggestions? *G*

I like this, Marge... It's a smile generator!

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16 posted 2002-04-06 11:00 AM


You always put a smile in my heart, Marge!
Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-04-06 11:45 AM


I love the way you describe those little wrinkles, Marge....
"smile wrinkles" sounds so much better than "crows feet"
I hate the idea of a crow walking on my face......the idea of a smile walking there is so much more appealing.
~many smiley hugs~


copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (04-06-2002 11:46 AM).]

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18 posted 2002-04-06 12:14 PM


I love your foreverlies...

hugss
M

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19 posted 2002-12-31 04:01 AM


remembering this one, yes....
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