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One More Dream

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Charisma
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One More Dream

Could I have one more dream?
Instead of reality
Where love and warmth
Conceal lonely souls
Where I could find
Inspiration to be
The spirit who offers
Lover's affluence

Could I have one more dream?
In this world of solitude
Where I will intrude rudely
To defeat demons harm
And where I can find harmony
In daydreams near tomorrow
With the strength to face
Dreamless reality

Can't dreams come true?
In the world of reality
Where soul and mind
Can drift on courteous wings
Where dust of love sprinkles,
' Twill blanket you and me
Seal our souls together
At least for eternity



Charisma
31/03/02

~*Theresia~*  

© Copyright 2002 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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(sigh) Oh Charisma, I could never ever imagine  aworld without dreams, I think dreams are the most important part of our lives and what makes us smile and what makes us happy when we hold onto them and see them come true! (kiss on cheek) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I too wish for all your dreams to come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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what world exists without
dreams of another

enjoyed this one
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Charisma,
this is one of your best, if not your very best....I love this, and I wish I wrote this
I think it's excellent!!
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Very nice Charisma...James
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Charisma~

This is very touching...peaceful dreams to you...


Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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yes my friend. . . one more indeed. . .

well done. . . I like the tone of this one. . . good to see you back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Thank you all for your comments, know that they are appreciated by me....love you all

(((hugs))
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"Fairy tales can come true
it can happen to you
if you're young at heart"
                    
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Could I have one more dream?
Instead of reality
Where love and warmth
Conceal lonely souls
Where I could find
Inspiration to be

I like this very much, Charisma...

How wonderful might this life of mine be
If I could wake to find my dreams are reality
Instead I leave slumber to face worries and cares
And a life that fuels the cruelest nightmares.

Not really... but that's where my mind went on thoughts of dreams lasting. *S*
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Charisma - yes, you may have one more dream, or as many as it takes to makes yours come true...

BC
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Can't dreams come true?
In the world of reality
Where soul and mind
Can drift on courteous wings
Where dust of love sprinkles,
' Twill blanket you and me
Seal our souls together
At least for eternity
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Chrisma, this is beautiful...
and yes, dreams do come true.  Hugs.
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I have been reading some of your work. Beautiful!!!
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