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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-04-02 01:28 AM


In cold and clouded eyes
there is an anger.
The very last of control swings
its final blow
then dies
insignificantly upon once strong soil.
Somewhere there was a breath of me
so long ago a girl
and I'm not fighting now to be the real me
because the clown took over
the solitude gets the best of a person
once the pity parties start getting wild flavored.


How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-02 01:36 AM


Allow me to buy the first round!
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2 posted 2002-04-02 08:36 AM




(big hugggsssssss) I think it all takes time to find out who we really are when we are so very young, sweet friend, I have known this anger before all too much and it is quite a tedious test to overcome but in the end the victory is rewarding! (kiss on cheek) I hope now peace fills your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-02 09:06 AM


I've seen those eyes...

nicely written


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4 posted 2002-04-02 03:31 PM


"the solitude gets the best of a person. . . "

sometimes. . . when we let it. . .

well done. . . emotional and profound. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2002-04-02 04:30 PM


Jenn~

awwww I have tears in my eyes....hope all is good with you...Peace


Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-04-02 05:40 PM


What acumen shown here

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-04-02 06:35 PM


and I'm not fighting now to be the real me
because the clown took over
the solitude gets the best of a person
once the pity parties start getting wild flavored

Tis a battle you'll not have to fight alone dear friend, you have much support and many friends here.Powerful and emotional penmanship!!!
HUGZ Temptress

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