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SEA
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0 posted 04-01-2002 11:40 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




She sat with empty wishes
Scattered on the floor
Listened to the walls wonder why
He doesn’t come ‘round any more

Broken dreams echo from the corners
They too, miss him so much
She just stares at hisfreeze~framed smile
Pictures of once upon a time, touch

Expressionless tears fall with no sound
Knowing she feels what they can’t convey
It’s the same ‘ole heartache
Just a different day…..

~SEA~


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1 posted 04-01-2002 11:42 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I too know this kind of heartache so well and I dream of finding stillness of heart and a way to make all my dreams come true and make each day like a holiday! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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She sat with empty wishes
Scattered on the floor
Listened to the walls wonder why
He doesn’t come ‘round any more

If it helps any, knowing why doesn't really make it any easier.  Just my experience.  Now that's funny!!!
Cheer up...I hear it's gonna rain!
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always, thank you sweet Noah

Cowboy, yes, I'm hearing whispers of rain this weekend I do hope so... and yeah, I'm thinkin the why of it, would probably just hurt more than the not knowing. thank you
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4 posted 04-01-2002 11:54 PM       View Profile for Magicmystery   Email Magicmystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Magicmystery's Home Page   View IP for Magicmystery

beautiful and melancholy. I was also left wondering why he doesn't come around anymore.  you made me feel her loss as if it had been mine once.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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5 posted 04-02-2002 01:28 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Your tears do have sound, because I hear them.     (((hugs)))

me

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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6 posted 04-02-2002 06:34 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

another beauty from your hand Sea,
thanks for sharing.

((hugs))
Charisma
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7 posted 04-02-2002 06:42 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"It’s the same ‘ole heartache
Just a different day….."

You've captured this feeling of longing perfectly Susan ... a very emotive piece, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Susan, wow, you have said this too well. Same old day, more sadness, no answers.
I still ask why, too.
Peace
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knowing why? Hmmm... the why so often makes little sense to us..and if it is told..it often seems it makes no sense to us and perfect sense to them....

nicely done my friend... and a hug to you for your day
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10 posted 04-02-2002 09:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

they run together, days

like lovers holding hands

look forward to the new ones

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SEA~
Oooooh, tears are memories to be caught, held, felt, shared~

I'll catch !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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dry your salty tears
look up and find a new love
walk into my arms

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Susan,

once again your beautiful words
grace these pages of blue...this is
a really wonderful heartfelt write
sweetie...i felt your pain and i know
the soundless tears you speak of. but
remember tomorrow is another day and
i hope you find your sunshine again
soon. hugs to you my sweet friend!

love ya
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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Sometimes, the rain sounds differently if you listen with the soul.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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"It's the same ole heartache
just a different day."
James
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Yes, I think we’ve all sat with our empty wishes surrounding us. Such a soft and tender write of the hearts longing Susan.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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17 posted 04-02-2002 10:51 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Sue...hey Sue!!!!

Wow oh Wow oh Wow!!!

Love the poem...and your graphics are perfect
for the poem..
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Broken dreams echo from the corners
They too, miss him so much
She just stares at hisfreeze~framed smile
Pictures of once upon a time, touch

Beautifully expressed, Sue....
Sensitively and soulfully written.
~dreamy hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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Susan,
Time...it takes a lot of time. And the more rainy days the less time it takes.
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I Feel for you Friend, I can feel your pain in this. I hope you Only the best. Cas-
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this is so sad, and so like me
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Amazing
 
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