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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-01 10:26 PM


When The Moon Spreads Her Wings
By: Noah Eaton
4/1/02

Every night before I fall asleep
I tuck my blankets to my neck, all over me
It feels like your warm body holding me
I lay there thinking "If I could hold you for real!"
Then I wouldn't ever again have to face insomnia
I can feel your hand in mine, keeping me company
And look out the window, I can see the moon rise like a phoenix
Spreading her wings out, siling to us like a snow owl

Every day the summer is getting closer
I can feel you growing ever nearer
And deep down I know
You love me
And soon I know we will see
Between you and me
The moon will spread loves wings

I go about my business with your picture in mind
As long as we're together, I feel alright
All I need now is this stillness of heart to find me
You are like canteloupe at breakfast, you taste so sweet
My sun has always been an albatross
Frozen in yearning, my hearts castle is like greenware
Now together we'll sit at the potter wheel of life
Kneading loves sweet dreams, you are my hearts wife

Every day the summer is getting closer
I can feel you growing ever nearer
And deep down I know
You love me
And soon I know we will see
Between you and me
The moon will spread loves wings

My heart is not frozen, it's just leather hard
All I need is your kiss to make it an ocean to your heart
I believe we can go the distance, I know there is a way
Destiny will embrace us some day

I stay up till 10 listening to Latin music
Staring at your pictures, I still feel lovesick
It's hard to rest my eyes with the flickering moonlight
I dream of holding you and kissing you at nighttime
All I want is to hear you breathing
See you cry, feel your body, hear you laughing
To see your smile and love you forever
Is all I want, more than ever

Every day the summer is getting closer
I can feel you growing ever nearer
And deep down I know
You love me
And soon I know we will see
Between you and me
The moon will spread loves wings

I know we are meant to be
The moon will spread loves wings

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-01-2002 10:26 PM).]

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Saunni
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1 posted 2002-04-01 10:45 PM


Noah, this is absolutely beautiful! You sure have a way with words and as always you have so much to say from that loving heart of yours. Great write.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-04-01 10:50 PM


My heart is not frozen, it's just leather hard
All I need is your kiss to make it an ocean to your heart

You're one romantic heart and your poetry does have wings all their own!  
Lovely poem Noah~

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3 posted 2002-04-01 11:05 PM


Noah,
your words sing!!
I love this

Magicmystery
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4 posted 2002-04-01 11:44 PM


Noah!!!! I absolutely ADORE this poem... it has to be one of your finest. And I do believe you are in love!!!! I can see it in every longing, hopeful word you have written here.  And I do know how you are feeling right now... waiting is the hardest part... but it is well worth the wait.  Love always is.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-04-01 11:51 PM


...The moon will spread love's wings.
This is my favorite line, the mystery and the majesty. Beautiful work Noah. ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-04-02 12:10 PM


Every day the summer is getting closer
I can feel you growing ever nearer
And deep down I know
You love me
And soon I know we will see
Between you and me
The moon will spread loves wings


Gorgeous Noah...love reading your romantic poetry hon...beautifully written from your warm heart as always

                ~Victoria

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2002-04-02 03:44 AM


yes, wonderfully romantic...

great work, Noah...

Regards,
sudhir

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8 posted 2002-04-02 06:18 AM


awwwww what a beautiful song of heart. Love and warmth within. another amazing piece from your hand Noah...well done!!!

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2002-04-02 11:23 AM


Very beautiful, Noah. I know that summer is going to be a fine season for you this year!
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-04-02 11:26 AM


Yes, the moon WILL spread it's wings

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-04-02 04:02 PM


Enjoyed...James
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12 posted 2002-04-02 04:12 PM


Noah~

This is just amazing....


Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

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barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Suetang
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13 posted 2002-04-02 06:07 PM


Hello Noah

Your words flow so freely from your loving heart.  You always write so beautifully of love and longing.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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14 posted 2002-04-02 06:28 PM


Such purity of love you offer my friend...It will come Noah..it will come.
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