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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2002-04-01 05:11 PM



I can remain
quiet forever
feeling the anger
after the pain
Feeling unloved
after so much love
I can write in riddles
what hurts my ears
I have such rage
I hate myself for
becoming the one
that I dreaded
I cannot find
compassion in my heartless
heart to forgive
the unforgiven
I cannot
and that I can live with

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-04-01 05:14 PM


Wow, Walker you really turn it around at the end.
I like that.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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since 2000-12-17
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2 posted 2002-04-01 05:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, I can relate to this kind of feeling so very closely, I believe that there is hope and good in everyone and I hae no one but also there are those who refuse to listen and in this matter, I cannot help them and therefore cannot hold compassion toward those that can't listen! (kiss on cheek) This is so very powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-04-01 05:22 PM


Hello Walker

I am sure many can relate to these feelings and your words relayed your thoughts so very well.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-04-02 12:35 PM


There's a time for everything...even finally getting pissed!
baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
5 posted 2002-04-02 01:41 AM


OHHHHH I so  feel like this right now.  When i get like this i can't help but think "so many people, so little time"  I hope it get's better for you though.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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