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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-03-31 07:09 PM


Within my green gems
My magical stare tells you
To kiss me good-night

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2002-03-31 07:12 PM



You've expressed this so beautifully!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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2 posted 2002-03-31 08:35 PM


Beautiful Joanna!!  I saw the word 'magical' and I knew this would be perfect!
Happy Easter sweetie!
~Bunny Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-03-31 09:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I can't wait till you may come out to visit me this summer, for if you come I'd love to shower you with kisses! (kisses) I love you, my Joanna, you will always be the girl of my dreams!



Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-31-2002 09:42 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-03-31 09:56 PM


Sweet, short and lovely, Joanna
~green hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-03-31 10:03 PM


Upon your soft lips
I'm pulled in to your magic
To kiss you and stay.  

((Joanna))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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6 posted 2002-03-31 10:13 PM


Tara~

that's a lot of kissing... love this~

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-03-31 10:14 PM


Beautiful! You said alot in so few words.
Tracey
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8 posted 2002-03-31 10:30 PM


Well, I'll say goodnight...but I ain't kissin you...I don't care how magical those green eyes are!!! Rofl.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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9 posted 2002-03-31 10:37 PM


Thanks Everyone  

And Tracey...you know you want to LoL!

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-31-2002 10:38 PM).]

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