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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-03-31 07:04 PM



She listens to soft whispers of the moon
within solace of her lonely bedroom
softly whispering in the wind
whispering in the willows
the weeping willows of her heart
appearing like an angel in the night
a golden branch of blossoms white
scenting dreams with lavender light
flaxen moon drops blending her tears
in a winding river of lost years
a gentle touch of moonlight's glove
watching over her like stars above
a shining vow of faithful love
in whispering willows of her heart





"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-03-31 07:23 PM


flaxen moon drops blends her tears
in a winding river of lost years
a gentle touch of moonlight's glove
watching over her like stars above

Beautiful words, Victoria....and the way you write them, flows like silk....
Just lovely!
~many hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-03-31 07:29 PM


"a golden branch of blossoms white
scenting dreams with lavender light"

Wow!  Now I know why I love your poetry so.   *hugs* my friend

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3 posted 2002-03-31 08:42 PM


Perfect Victoria!  Oh I do believe this one is a keeper!  Hope you had a Happy Easter.
~Bunny Hugs to you, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-03-31 09:49 PM


Sometimes we are the only ones that hear
the whispers in our heart, and often times we are the only one who can answer them honestly.
Or something like that!  

Happy Easter Victoria, this was so pretty.

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5 posted 2002-03-31 09:53 PM


these are the silent voices that tug at our hearts
but what a wonderful grouping of portrait-perfect lines

what is a loss is a gain
and
what is gained, is a loss elsewhere

and life continues

In any case, Happy Easter, Vic
from both of us here in Indy. ~huuuuggg~  

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6 posted 2002-03-31 09:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may the willows of your heart always blossom with joy and fill your heart with springs essence! (kiss on cheek) I hope you've had the happiest Easter, sweet friedn, here's some big chocolate bunny hugs for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-31 10:44 PM


thank you Lyra dear..hugs to ya..

thank you Michael..I am glad you enjoyed

Nancy..thank you so much ..Bunny hugs to you too ha

thank you so much Lori...and I hope you had a happy Easter too..

Jeff dear..thank you and i hope you and Dulcie enjoyed your Easter also..

Noah..thank you hon..and i hope your basket was full of happiness and
joy for the future..

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8 posted 2002-03-31 11:27 PM


Lovely Victoria...James
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9 posted 2002-04-01 12:02 PM


So beautiful these lyrics...images of the swaying willow in the night wind, in the moonlight rain... wonderful. ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2002-04-01 12:22 PM


Ohhhhh Victoria, this is precious...
I very very much enjoyed reading your poem...
And happyEasterPoetFriend...
Hugs2uSweetie
*~coco~*

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11 posted 2002-04-01 08:38 AM


James..Hi James..nice to hear from you hugss

ThisDiamond..thank you so much and for peeking in..appreciate your comments...

Coco..Thank you..so nice of you to say..and so happy you enjoyed my words...hugss

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12 posted 2002-04-01 10:32 AM


Beautiful, Vic. I wonder what makes us feel so heart faithful to those who don't care enough?
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-04-01 05:42 PM


Maybe in our next life sandra we will be a man haa.. thanks hon hugs
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