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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-03-31 05:57 PM

                     Like a devoted lover clings to time,
                     with love as precious as bold trades of youth,
                     my love, made sure by answers divine,
                     deals with the mercy from the warmth of you.
                     For when I'm heedless, loved, or stained, or clean,
                     Or searching for my faults, or none, or more,
                     Regardless of the flight of past scenes
                     I give my heart invested in your worth.
                     So since I am not dead, sick, nor denied
                     Such is this virtue where my substance is,
                     Might I then cry indebted while alive
                     to be a part of your uncommon gift.
                     So what is left, is left for you to see
                     This love I live, much more for you than me.

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-31 06:01 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a wonderful heartfelt unselfish way to love someone, for to feel from the heart is how it should always be done! (big hugggssssss) May all that's left bound to last forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-03-31 06:03 PM

Ethome

a love poem, so sweet and selfless, warmed my heart, while making me sad. Beautifully expressed piece of feeling. You write so well in many different forms. If I say, more please, will you post another?

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-03-31 06:04 PM

What is left ethome is stunning poetry. You are the master of blue.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-04-01 02:38 PM

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