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RSEvans
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0 posted 2002-03-31 12:46 PM


Little hints, little clues
  Little things other than "I love you"s
Subtle things, Tiny notes
  Teensie things that make love float.
I read into everything
  So please give me reason to sing
Give me just those little hints
  Small shiny things from which sunlight glints.
Little looks, Slightest touch
  Little things that mean so much.
Glances, brushes, tiny stares.
  Things to let me know you care.
In case you missed it, I did not
  The little things mean a lot.

Chivalry is not dead.  I saw it coughing up lung butter last night, but it was still alive.  I think it has parvo.

© Copyright 2002 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2002-03-31 01:01 PM


Oh, little things sure do mean a lot.
This is good.
Peace
Sandra

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-03-31 01:02 PM


I read into everything
  So please give me reason to sing

I can sure relate to this!  Nice write, it is the little things that say so much.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-03-31 01:31 PM


Glances, brushes, tiny stares.
  Things to let me know you care.


and it's the little things that mean the world to me..I like the flow of your words *s
M

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-03-31 01:53 PM


RSEvans,
To me this is an excellent poem. A keeper.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-03-31 02:46 PM


Ah Rob...this is a keeper!
And how true....it is the little things that matter so much!
~Bunny Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-03-31 06:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooo sensitive and beautiful, sweet friend, the smallest things are indeed the jewels on a hearts crown and is what makes love golden and true! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rob, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
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7 posted 2002-03-31 07:16 PM



Indeed, they do!   Well said!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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