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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-31 12:57 PM



I Like It…Between the Lines
By Larry Chadwick


I love that look in your eyes,

Do it again
The one that seduces me.
Do it again
It seems it started when we met,
Do it again
It’s a look I love to see.


I love that touch on my hand,

Do it again
That communicates so much.
Do it again
It seems I never get enough,
Do it again
Of your tender loving touch.


I love the sound of your voice,

Do it again
It’s gentle tones ring in my ear.
Do it again
And when you say “I love you”,
Do it again
It makes me feel so dear.


I love the way you walk,

Do it again
That sassy little style.
Do it again
It’s a pleasure to my eyes,
Do it again
I’ll just follow for a while.


I found it all at once,

Do it again
When I discovered you.
Do it again
A lifetime of devotion,
Do it again
Is what I committed to.


March 30, 2002



Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-31 01:15 AM


Larry,
whispered words of promise that I love so much...do it again.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Larry C
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2 posted 2002-03-31 01:48 AM


Kethry,
Indeed...again just for me. Thanks.

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-31 01:48 AM


I found it all at once,
Do it again
When I discovered you.
Do it again
A lifetime of devotion,
Do it again
Is what I committed to.

Nice work if you can get it...'A lifetime of devotion'.

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-03-31 01:52 AM


Duncan,
Indeed it is but a rare find! Thank you sir.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-03-31 03:11 AM


It's not as rare as you think..*s

M..enjoying your lines, still

Charisma
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6 posted 2002-03-31 06:09 AM


Now this I like very much.......so do it again!



Charisma

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7 posted 2002-03-31 10:06 AM



That's better....

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2002-03-31 10:28 AM


Enjoyed this Larry!! It's sassy!
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9 posted 2002-03-31 10:55 AM


Larry C,
Good stuff, Happy Easter.

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10 posted 2002-03-31 12:27 PM




(smiles) Wow, you've done it again, sweet friend, you truly are the master at this wonderful form! (big hugggssssss) May you both forever be committed to the wonders of true love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-03-31 02:33 PM


...Love this Larry!...
...Do it again!...
Happy Easter, Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2002-03-31 03:57 PM


Isn't it the truth, there are some things we never tire of.
So you like the way I tweak you?
Be honest now!!  

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-31-2002 05:20 PM).]

ethome
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13 posted 2002-03-31 05:06 PM


Very nice...do it again!
Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-03-31 05:59 PM


I love that touch on my hand,
Do it again
That communicates so much.
Do it again
It seems I never get enough,
Do it again
Of your tender loving touch.


Just beautifully said, Larry...
~Happy Easter Hugggssss~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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