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Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2002-03-30 04:45 PM


*sigh* lots and lots of things going on right now. I miss my writing, and thanks for being patient when I don't get to reply much to all of you.
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empty hands build solid voids
to stage the misplacement of love upon.
When the seriousness subsides
and there are supposed to be smiles
who will fill those hardened hateful spaces?
life is in a hurry as love gives way
to hands tossed in exasperation
to unrelentingly attentives stares of blanks.
Sometimes I wonder will my mind grow older before I do.
Will it wander so far ahead of my supposed youthful age
that if it staggers I'll never notice?
When did I become the future me
instead of the present me?
My mind
will surely grow older before I do
and how many years ahead will it die
before my body does?

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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1 posted 2002-03-30 04:48 PM


well your mind seems fine thus far?  No worries.  Provoking piece, here.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-30 04:54 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Jenn, we all understand with all our hearts how busy you've been and we understand that you haven't posted too much lately, but it is more important to first conquer these priorities and I'm sorry to feel the stress here! (sigh) Know you are loved by many and always follow your heart, sweet friend, this will pass and will only keep growing with heart and rich in love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2002-03-30 06:27 PM


Jenn~

I know the feeling of the mind moving too quickly....grand release here.... be well and Peace


Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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