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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-03-30 06:20 AM




Surrender

There’s so much life I’ve left to live
So much still I’ve got to give
And as long as the fire of my life is burning still
I’ve the strength left to do my will
~*~

The strength to give up this fear that in me lies within
The power to know and understand you my best friend
What if we didn’t tell them and they never knew
Just how much I’ve in love with you
~*~

Cause I’d surrender everything
To just love you as I do
To live my life to the fullest
To reach my hand out to you
~*~

I know you can feel our love too
We’ll make it; this I promise you
A thousand dreams I still believe
We’ll see them come true to eternity
~*~

I know I can’t survive another night away from you
You’re the reason behind all I do
You’re the inspiration that allows me to go on
You are the heart of my love song
~*~

Right now, there’s no better time for you and me
From this fear we will break free
We’ll make this fantasy into reality
As the rain comes down endlessly
~*~

I’d surrender everything to feel you in my arms again
I reach to you my lover and most cherished friend
I know you can feel it too
We’ll make it through, this I promise you
~*~

Every night my love is getting longer
This fire continues to get stronger
I’ll swallow my pride
I’ll catch your fall
yes my darling I surrender
For you I surrender all
~*~


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"


[This message has been edited by Aimster (03-30-2002 06:30 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-30 06:27 AM


Amy,
A powerful expression of love.You make me envious
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-03-30 12:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you together surrender into each others hearts where your dreams rest and find true comfort and peace there always! (kiss on cheek) This is another wonderful addition to your gorgeous love library, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-30 12:31 PM


oh Amy
you do write of your love so beautifully!!
It's like reading a page of your heart.

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4 posted 2002-03-30 12:45 PM


Amy...you write of love so very eloquently
and with such great feelings...Very well
done!

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5 posted 2002-03-30 01:54 PM


Aimster,
A powerful write, enjoyed the read.

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