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Open Poetry #19

So Comfortable

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-30 05:28 AM

So Comfortable

there was a fire
in your eyes
that burnt a hollow
to my soul
it left such a weakness
in my knees
how could someone
draw you so near
yet leave you
so far away
it is the kind of place
some never know
but somehow I feel
so comfortable in

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-30 07:33 AM

Sometimes the trick to the warmth of the fire is knowing where to stand...well done Helen...this lent itself to some good imagery!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-30 12:47 PM

(smiles) I think when we feel love at first we always have a tendency to feel shy because it is brand new to us and we don't know how we carry on in case we lose it all of a sudden by the fear we feel, but then I know in time the distance shortens and then it feels so comfortable to be close to each others heart! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may love always bring a smile to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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