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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-03-29 11:40 PM




You think too much
you move too fast
get your feet all tangled
in days we haven’t seen

I really wish
you’d just sit down
listen to some b-sides
with me

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1 posted 2002-03-29 11:44 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I hope she does come always and accept your invitation and listen to all those wonderful records with you! (big huggggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-03-29 11:56 PM


Duncan,
In the days before CD's B-sides were my favourites. Thanks for the memory.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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with you
3 posted 2002-03-30 12:26 PM


Hey Cowboy,
I remember going to the record store, to buy a new 45 with my allowance I loved the b sides too...

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4 posted 2002-03-30 01:56 PM


Duncan,
Exactly, enjoyed.

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5 posted 2002-03-30 02:29 PM


get your feet all tangled
in days we haven’t seen


I really wish
you’d just sit down
listen to some b-sides
with me

=========================

*smiling at you*

This is so you....and thats a good thing...
(loving the slowin it all down -- serenity of this)
Im thinking hangin out on the porch with you is a very cool thing

did you know some of Van Morrisons biggests hits were the b-sides

how about how good it feels to finally forgive you
   ~~~
the moment I jumped off of it ... was the moment I touched down.

~Alanis Morissette~

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6 posted 2002-03-30 02:33 PM


duncan, I'm b-hind you all the way..
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-03-30 03:19 PM


The simple pleasures we miss...
Really like this. ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2002-03-30 03:22 PM


Well said, too bad there are no "B" sides anymore to help us slow down.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-03-30 07:20 PM


Oh yes...the B-sides, Duncan...I remember them well.  They always had the best songs on them, the ones you never heard on the radio.
Great poem! ~hugs~

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10 posted 2002-03-30 07:30 PM


"You think too much
you move too fast"


I don't know why I like that part, but I do. Not that I don't like the rest of it, but those two lines just got me. Thanks for the read!

I am a geek!!

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11 posted 2002-03-30 08:00 PM


get your feet all tangled
in days we haven’t seen
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love these lines Duncan!
Love this entire short piece...
and the remember of B-sides.
Good stuff here!
~Bunny hugs and a Happy Easter, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tracey
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12 posted 2002-03-31 09:13 PM


get your feet all tangled
in days we haven’t seen

Well, I suppose that’s better than having them all tangled in my mouth, where they usually are!! Lol.
Yep, sometimes we’ve got to just slow down and smell the roses huh? Or listen to the b-sides. Now where’d I put those old 45’s???

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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13 posted 2002-03-31 09:17 PM


I very much enjoyed the read PoetFriendDuncan and I wish you a happy easter with lotz of chocolate bunny sweets...

*~coco~*

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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2002-04-01 01:41 PM



Love the play on words!  Bravo!

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