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Lovesick Romeo
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Lovesick Romeo |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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"Lovesick Romeo" Dumb struck Love struck He melts under her gaze From the corners of his room the doors opened She entered his heart Her eyes with promises to be Sharing the stars they crossed their universes He told her: I will do anything for you for a kiss. . . Her twinkling green eyes gave a simple reply He approached her tentatively half-tripping on untied laces Holding out his Gifts of extra half-pint milk with bent straw and a nap blanket. (Inspired by Dire Straits' "Romeo and Juliet") |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so sweet, Jeff....it sounds like Kindergarten love...  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider, Enjoyed the read. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Lyra the Munk-ster: could use a Munk-Report on how you are doing lately. You were in my thoughts the past couple of days as to your health. Why oh why do the brightest soul-stars seem afflicted by the fragility of health? Thank you, Lyra, and even tho this was First grade love at its best, it...uh.....still has a big part of me in it.....*grin* Sey-Hey Kid: Happy Holidays to you! I regard each reading by you a distinct honor, and a reply a gift! Thank you Sey! My best to you, and enjoy the warmth of the holiday Sun. Jeff  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo sweet and heartfelt, sweet friend, I have heard Mark Knopfler sing this song, it is one of my favorite songs of all time and your gorgeous words are just as golden! (big hugggssssss) You are a true modern romeo, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh Jeff...this is so sweet! Thanks for the smile. Enjoyed the read. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is cute indeed Jeff..adorable ..i still remember being in love with little Billy Green in elementary school..i always followed him to the pencil sharpener  hugs~Victoria
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. My soundless Oh of admiration, my breathy sigh would tell anyone who saw me that I’ve just been to the soul filling station and been re Shadowed. This is another of your utter utter best darling boy. *This is excellent and as always I love it Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always Hugs to you Dulcie and Batman *smile*    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I think... I think I like! Too sweet! Thanks for sharing! I am a geek!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for caring and for thinking about me, Jeff...that is much appreciated! The truth is though...that right now, I can't tell how I'm doing as far as the big picture goes just yet....I won't know that til after I'm done with radiation treatments....probably the end of April or beginning of May.... But...I can tell you that I am tolerating the treatments pretty well...so far. I was supposed to get very exhausted and nauseated and so far neither one has happened to me...I didn't even get the skin burns that I was warned about. It makes me wonder if maybe there isn't real radiation coming out of that evil machine. I've also been tolerating the chemo very well. No nausea or hair loss yet from that...the only thing I've gotten is from the steroid they give me with it to prevent allergic reactions...my ankles, fingers and face swell up...now I truly look more like a chipmunk!  Sorry for the long reply...but you ASKED! Have a great holiday ~warm hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is great and highlights the folly of first love and youth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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