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The End Of Where To Start
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The End Of Where To Start |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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It's five O'clock in the morning first night alone's slipped away the curtains on this open window flutter as the breeze's play and I stare out at the lonely street gazing through the falling rain as I sit here thinkin why we said good-bye yesterday. Chorus: Oh baby I know winds of change will always blow there's no doubt they stir in every soul and we drifted by the reason we were joined at the heart Now I can't describe this feeling at the end of where to start. In two more hours I leave this room and fade into the working game I might see you around sometime but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain but our time was up with nothing left but to go our separate ways Chorus: Oh baby I know winds of change will always blow there's no doubt they stir in every soul and we drifted by the reason we were joined at the heart Now I can't describe this feeling at the end of where to start. Copyrighteltrue@E3B1G92001/roach&morrisinc. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh baby I know winds of change will always blow there's no doubt they stir in every soul and we drifted by the reason we were joined at the heart Now I can't describe this feeling at the end of where to start. In two more hours I leave this room and fade into the working game I might see you around sometime but things'll never be the same Still I wish I could hold you now one more time to ease the pain but our time was up with nothing left but to go our separate ways ===================================== Hey E-babes...where ya been.... so good to see your name here.... and you know Im loving this bittersweet beauty...an achingly melodic write. You write the longing so that we feel the blues coming on. Hope all is well up your way poet pal....good to read your rhymes again.  how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I can feel a little sadness and yearning in these words, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and now the beginning has returned to your heart and love is close to your heart everyday now! (big hugggssssss) My thoughts are always with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice ethome...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This had an old time feel about it, Ethome...a lovely ballad tune...sure would like to hear the music behind it...and JM's right, where the heck ya been? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Eric..it's good to see you! You know I love your lyrical poetry...the song always plays in my head as I read. More please! |
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