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janmew
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0 posted 2002-03-29 03:17 PM


It is in your eyes.
It is a place like none other;
a place once only imagined,
but when I look into your eyes,
always, I see it there,
and there I float effortlessly
like a bird upon the wind.

It is a place where time has no meaning
and gravity does not exist;
where music plays silently
strummed on heart-strings
accompanied by a chorus of breath angels.

It is a place I will never forget,
even when I am far from you,
and the peaceful shores where it resides
are but a memory
I am still there,
for I carry it with me with ease.
It is Love.



Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

[This message has been edited by janmew (03-30-2002 07:18 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2002-03-29 07:32 PM


Oh, this sure sounds like love to me!!!
It is most certainly a nice place to be.
I enjoyed reading this over and over.
Very very nice!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-03-29 07:37 PM


janmew,
Enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2002-03-29 09:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish this love to always sing in your heart and that you'll always see joy through his eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is very lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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