Right......................................................there

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Open Poetry #19

Right......................................................there

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-29 11:16 AM

How do you find it
so easy
to touch me
right there

How do you know
the look
that you create
with your hand
right there

Did you practice?
did it come to you
one night
right there
in your mind

did you find
how to unwind
me

right there

~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2002-03-29 12:14 PM

interesting thoughts

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2002-03-29 01:19 PM

interesting indeed - rife with potential meaning, this can be interpreted a many number of ways... i wonder what was intended.

[This message has been edited by Christopher (03-29-2002 01:19 PM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-03-29 01:26 PM

Yes.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-03-29 02:09 PM

I really like this!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2002-03-29 02:53 PM

Oh yeah, right there.

Nan

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-29 07:18 PM

There...that single place
where all things are.
When touched, a dynamo spins
a megawatt of passion

Released there inside the mind...
spreading through the veins
going....everywhere and there...

Like the poem...very nice...very nice!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-29 09:09 PM

(sigh) I think we can all ask ourselves this same question when love seems to welcome us, and whatever the answer may be, it always feels so supernatural and magical when love touches our hearts! (big hugggsssss) This poem is beautifully touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-29 09:21 PM

Oooh...................................yesss!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-03-29 10:43 PM

Soleil

I guess some just know the right place..loved the format of this!

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2002-03-30 12:13 PM

pure mikesmanship...

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