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Open Poetry #19

Run Away Train

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-29 02:38 AM

Run Away Train

emotional vehicle
out of control freight
transporting feelings
carrying past and present
metal sparking metal
iron rails melt
against iron will
strength and weakness fuse
full powered steam
burning smell of heat
hurried rapid movement
at the greatest of speed
dragging along
unintended lines
side by side

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-29 09:10 AM

"emotional vehicle
out of control freight
transporting feelings
carrying past and present
metal sparking metal
iron rails melt
against iron will
strength and weakness fuse"

wow! very well done!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-03-29 09:35 AM

Helen, this is POWERFUL!
I keep saying this is one of your best yet you keep getting better and better

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-29 07:24 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh... love this, sweet friend, I too think this is one of your best yet too, may this train come your way and offer great joy to the present and beyond for you! (kiss on cheek) This is superb, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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