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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-03-29 12:06 PM



The Purest Of


Two hands to hold onto forever
two arms to wrap around destiny,
two eyes to gaze into paradise
two lips to kiss so passionately
~
Two spirits that promise devotion
two names written in the stars above,
two lives intertwined by God's laughter
two hearts joined by the purest of love
~
Two souls awestruck at heaven's door
is love, indeed, worth waiting for

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-29 12:10 PM


Melissa,
this is stunning!

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2 posted 2002-03-29 12:12 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friedn, may your love lead you through that door to eternity and may you forever share a betrothal of loves happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so gorgeous, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-03-29 12:51 PM


Melissa...Exquisite love poetry...a word-painting displaying the true essence of love.

**Ivy Rose

Magicmystery
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4 posted 2002-03-29 01:52 AM


This was beautiful!!! I got the visual on this one right away.  

"two names written in the stars above,
two lives intertwined by God's laughter"

this says it all.

Love, Light and Peace

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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5 posted 2002-03-29 07:18 AM


Lovely, Melissa (impatiently waiting here)
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-03-29 07:37 AM


Melissa,
Is there a question? Lovely write.

Sven
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7 posted 2002-03-29 02:57 PM


as always my friend. . . you speak with your heart. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Chelsea~
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8 posted 2002-03-30 07:40 PM


missy,

*** Beautiful ***


Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-03-30 08:09 PM


...Exquisitely penned!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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