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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-03-29 12:05 PM





The caress,
sensory perfection
soothing worries
love touch reflection

Guiding whispers
satisfied sounding,approval
automatic
stress removal

Intuition of need
in ache location
satiation within
fingertip persuasion

~SEA~



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AniKay83
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1 posted 2002-03-29 12:09 PM


This is so beautiful and has a rhythm like a song or spell. I'm impressed.
~Chrissy

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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2 posted 2002-03-29 12:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully gentle and compassiuonate, sweet friend, may loves fingers forever caress you and cheer you up when you're feeling down and slow down your beating heart with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful persusasive thouight of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magicmystery
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3 posted 2002-03-29 12:15 PM


This is hypnotic!!! I loved it!!!

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-03-29 12:39 PM


SEA...So much beauty in these wonderful lines of verse.  Fingertips can be amazing instruments of love.  ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-03-29 12:42 PM


This is lovely Sea...James
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By the sea
6 posted 2002-03-29 12:46 PM


Susan, you could easily be desribing a massage. LOL!  Very pretty, my friend.   (((hugs)))

me

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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7 posted 2002-03-29 01:35 AM


This could get me in trouble...love how you do that!
Cowboy

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8 posted 2002-03-29 06:59 AM


love touch reflection


love the phrase..*s

M

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I am really enjoying this theme, and the pictures match so well with your words.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-03-29 07:51 AM


touch of fingers
to special places
is a whisper kiss

enjoyed the thought SEA

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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2002-03-29 08:53 AM


pursuading fingers
the sensory perception
between two lovers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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The heart of you
12 posted 2002-03-29 01:09 PM


Crystal Blue.  And Passionate Red.  Well done.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Aimster
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13 posted 2002-03-29 03:19 PM


susan,

beautiful sweetie, really beautiful! perfect rhythm in
this as well...just a really wonderful write! take care.


amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-03-29 07:28 PM


I could just FEEL this poem, Sue...
beautifully done!   ~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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