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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-03-28 05:29 PM

This love, in extreme held silent
rages through my soul, violent
ever consuming whispers sound
poetic expression, profound

Complete devotion, so intense
deepest emotion, no pretense
willing worship upon my knees
with wanton wish just to appease

Desire to be kept, in your eyes
experience touch, without lies
lifetime of love just under skin
perpetual waiting within

Surrender I, to voiceless vow
Someday to give, what I can’t now

~SEA~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-28 05:35 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope now your vow has been completed and now you are able to express your love for your sweetheart everyday happily! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought a smile to my face, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2002-03-28 05:39 PM

...what I can't give...now....

wow...

I was wondering when we were going to see a new one from you...I guess I ought to wonder more often if just that mere thought alone gets something like this from you...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-03-28 05:40 PM

I will refrain from replying as I wish due to good sense and the desire to continue posting here at Passions

This is phenomenal in its basis!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-03-28 06:08 PM

Dear SEA,
Too much passion, too much intensity. Too much poetry? Never!

Nan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-03-28 06:26 PM

Sea,
Well done, enjoyed.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2002-03-28 06:27 PM

Susan,

The passion is this piece is wonderfully expressed. It's about time you posted again. I've been waiting.

Now write another. (((hugs)))

me

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-03-28 07:09 PM

A lesson in patience...my least favorite topic! lol
Sometimes, we wait and are rewarded. Sometimes, we just wait. Either way, makes for good poetry.
Loved this, Susan.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-28 07:46 PM

Beautiful Susan! I too have been waiting for you to post another...this one was well worth that wait. Hugs!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

9 posted 2002-03-28 07:51 PM

A poem intense in its meaning. Words that reached deep with purpose.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2002-03-28 10:21 PM

Susan,

this is so beautiful! wonderful
writing from your pen indeed...
i loved this! hugs to you girlie!

love ya,
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2002-03-28 10:47 PM

This sounds like a very heart felt poem. And, a very good one, too.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-03-28 11:21 PM

SEA~
Somehow I don't ever see you as 'voiceless'~
BIG Huggies sweetie~
You speak volumes !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

13 posted 2002-03-28 11:28 PM

Desire to be kept, in your eyes
experience touch, without lies
===============================
Beautifully expressed. Sounds like a dream.
~Chrissy

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

14 posted 2002-03-30 11:15 PM

Strong words, strong emotions. A beautiful write.
alan

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

15 posted 2002-03-31 01:24 AM

SEA,
this an indian couple for sure...Two in tents. For a silence... it is deafening with implicit emotions.
Wow!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2002-03-31 06:06 AM

*WOW* what a volume in your words....excellent as always Sea

((Hugs))
Charisma

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

17 posted 2002-03-31 08:14 AM

What a vivid picture of wanting, someday. Thank you, SEA

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