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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-28 10:30 AM



let my arms enfold
if heaven is in my arms
it shines in your eyes

Inspired by:  Whispers to a Poet




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-28-2002 11:18 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-28 10:34 AM


answering the invite with class... nicely done my friend.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-28 11:15 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your words are always so amazing and a delight to read! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-03-28 11:19 AM



Well now...this oozes charm!

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2002-03-28 12:13 PM


Ditto to all the above, very beautiful....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-03-28 12:37 PM


let my arms enfold
if heaven is in my arms
it shines in your eyes


Smiling with moist lips
*Blushing*  warmth rises from touch
Eyes kissing your thoughts


I just love senryus and haikus  and especially yours


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with you
6 posted 2002-03-28 05:48 PM



beautiful

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-03-28 07:59 PM


...Classy...  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

RosePetal
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8 posted 2002-03-28 09:46 PM


you are #1 at these senryu's!!
Always, you make me smile

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2002-03-28 10:28 PM


Sigh..I wonder why these make me feel so melancholy.
Beautiful words.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-03-28 11:22 PM


The fact that this is so short makes the feeling left by it that much stronger. Awesome
~Chrissy

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Honeybee
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11 posted 2002-03-29 12:12 PM



*sighs* this is simply beautiful!
You write the most romantic senryus ever!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-03-29 12:43 PM


Interloper...Heaven is always in the arms of love. Wonderful verse...subtility, gentleness are found in the embrace of these words.  ***Ivy Rose
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-04-02 11:48 AM


InterLoper~
Hope you can hear this *sigh* ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
14 posted 2002-04-02 01:36 PM


*sigh*.....didn't want to sigh, but before I knew it escaped from within....enjoyed the warmth within.

Charisma

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15 posted 2002-04-02 01:38 PM


sigh....beautiful....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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