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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The bar erupted in crude violence, With crashing and bashing throughout the place, A whirling and swirling of disturbance With angry screams from most every face. Except two. The corner table sitting in silence She sat as he read midst the violence, Fists swung and bodies clashed in nearness, Yet none came near to disrupt their calmness And soon the fight faded from the premise. No one knew What caused the fight to quickly develop Or why those two didn’t get enveloped, Their calm never wavered despite the brawl, They maintained a serenity regal. Gloom |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Interesting...what made you think of this? I like the image this gives me, gloom..the atmosphere..  K |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
They were reading poetry of course!! Enjoyed this sir.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom, Not only reading poetry but writing poetry, enjoyed |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that one I really, really liked! I felt I was in that room. ~* Sharon *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, they were reading and writing poetry and listening to karaoke! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Serinity... such a woderfull word Like this write Sir Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He had wine and she her tea both enraptured in poetry amid the gory gloried mess she placed her hand in his caress the world about them spun and in their world they were...becalmed.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Geezz, I can't top that reply Connie..*s you sure were submitting to these words today *s Professor, I never seem to see what your eyes do in those places... maybe I need a better look...or new glasses M |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
When faced with adversity or put in a chaotic situation, one can remain calm with dignity. That is what came to my mind upon reading this. |
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