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A creature of the Night
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A creature of the Night |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
As I take in the visions of my world around me I see something I don’t like the looks of at all It was hidden deep within the shadow so no one would see What a hideous creature it was It had the looks of purest evil One that festered in the darkest places of mans heart This vision put my heart and mind into an upheaval As I watched the creature, he moved thru the shadows with ease With eyes that glowed like a jackal in the night Just then it stepped into the faint illumination What I saw gave my heart and soul a fearful fright As I looked at the reflection of ME |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
they say we all have the potential to show an entire spectrum of human emotions..nice write |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I agree, this indeed portrays so many different emotions, I love it! (big hugggssssss) Your style of writing always amazes me, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
refelections and insight those two sides we all have a dark and a light Hope |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very intense.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nice to see you here Alan! Good write, very deep, leaving lots to ponder. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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