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Open Poetry #19

Done So Right

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-03-27 10:03 PM

Slip into me in the power
That only you can claim
Caress my sweat in heat
That climbs walls inside
Moaning their blues of depth
Into rhythms of beats
That claims our song
In every note bearing testament
To the heat of the moment
Exploding in fireworks
Rocking for more
Touching
Done so right

D.Lester Young (03/27/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)
Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-27 11:26 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, the light of passion fills your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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