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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-03-27 09:00 PM



A Breeze



I’d love to share a breeze with you
to touch the same fresh air
I’d have a chance to get a view
of wind blown through your hair

And if I stayed awhile nearby
inhaled a breath or two
in waves of air that flowed so nigh
I’d catch the scent of you

I’d love to watch the moon reflect
a glisten in your eyes
and in that moment might detect
a whisper in your sighs

And if a cloud should dare come near
and hide the moon so blue
when next the light would reappear
I’d steal a kiss or few

I’d love to share a breeze with you
and listen to your song
I might perchance then hear anew
the dream for which I long





© 03.26.02



© Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-03-27 09:07 PM


Krawdad

Very tenderly romantic...gets a big sigh from me.

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2 posted 2002-03-27 09:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so inspiring and a leasure to read, this is very lovely! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-28 06:49 AM


e...the wind has quite a stir...h

btw....
CONGRATS ON THE 1000


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4 posted 2002-03-28 08:33 AM


I understand these thoughts very very well...

thanks for sharing them

K

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