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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-03-27 08:33 PM



Got a call,
Wasn’t good news.
Through all your wisdom,
I learned to stay away from booze.

You’re in the hospital,
Not doing so well.
I tried to fight back the tears,
But the tears began to swell.

I just want one last time,
To hear your jokes and laugh.
I’ll tell your grandkids your stories,
On your own behalf.

One last time to argue,
One last time to play cards.
All your old friends keep saying,
“Give him my warmest regards…”

You’ll be missed,
Oh yes you will.
You may have had problems,
Or been very ill.

But you’ll be remembered,
For all your loving care.
I always loved you,
On that I swear.

One last time,
To see your smile.
One last time,
To make it all worthwhile…..

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-03-28 11:04 AM


HI--

One last time, to say all you had to....I like this, have been here many times....Peace to you...

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-28 11:47 AM




(sigh) I know how you feel, sweet friend, there have been relatives that have treated me like a fool over the years but now I always wish I could give them a second chance and see if they perhaps can forgive me! (big hugggssssss) I hope this happens for you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-03-28 12:40 PM


Staci, it is a hard lesson learned, but my dear sweet neice, I am so glad that you learned that lesson.  As always, I am here should you need me......always....
~D~

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
4 posted 2002-03-28 01:27 PM




"One last time,
To see your smile.
One last time,
To make it all worthwhile….."


Your words are heartfelt ...

Losing someone is never easy.

This was a really sweet tribute  

[This message has been edited by Verve (03-28-2002 01:29 PM).]

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
5 posted 2002-03-28 02:06 PM


thank u all, the replies were much appreciated.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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