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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-27 07:54 PM



Oh My, Moon On High

~*Marge Tindal*~

~Oh my gosh
take a look at that moon
putting on a spectacular showing
Prissing across pristine sky this night
Why, would you look at how she's glowing
Round and firm and fully-packed in her glory
She'll turn romantic heads this night, or I've
missed my story !  See how flirtatious she is
as she magnetizes the night, giving off such
an attitude, you think she's done it a time
or two ? Once more round the world, all
the way again ... waving moonbeams of
delight to all my faraway friends
Hello !  She whispers nightly
I'll be back lightly~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-27-2002 08:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-27 08:00 PM


Yes the moon is a wonderful inspiration and a common bond that shines on us all.
When it rises tonight it will remind me of your saucey little poem.  Great job Marge~

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2 posted 2002-03-27 08:01 PM


You never give up on the moon, do you Marge?  Reminds me of that "Yellow Moon" I did awhile back, on your inspiration as I recall.

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


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3 posted 2002-03-27 08:31 PM


OMG, you wrote this one just for me, didn't you? Slipping this moon into my fav files.
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4 posted 2002-03-27 08:36 PM


I enjoy looking at a big yellow moon, Marge. And, this poem is just beautiful.
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5 posted 2002-03-27 08:57 PM


Marge--It hasn't turned up here yet, except in this poem.  I'll bet your poem is better!
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6 posted 2002-03-27 09:32 PM


BluesSerenade~
Thank you ... it was instant inspiration~

Krawdad~
Oh ... never will I 'give up' on her~
I recall your 'Yellow Moon' ..

MidniteSun~
Oh ... I MUST have !
You enjoy it all you want sweet poetess~

SmartChick~
Thanks sweetie~ *hugs*

MartieSis~
Oh .. wait until you see her~
OH MY !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-03-28 10:12 PM


Marge:  I love the poem and how you have presented it!  Just lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-03-28 10:16 PM


The moon was so beautiful tonight....thanks for capturing it in words.

sky

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9 posted 2002-03-28 11:13 PM


BettyLou~
AND tonight she glows even brighter~
My what a peek-a-view~

SkyShine~
Thanks ... she's a beauty that demands to be written~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2002-03-29 02:00 AM


Well wasn't this a spectacular poem... just Brilliant!!!

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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11 posted 2002-03-29 09:55 AM


MagicMystery~
Thank you ever so much for letting me know you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2002-03-29 10:24 AM


Auntie Margie girl, see what you did you went and inspired me enough to try a shape all on my own. No where near as beautiful as yours of course but then it wouldn’t be. Thank you for the warmth of you that I keep in my spirit. The moon is as majestic and magical as you are. Wonderful and excellent writing.
  
I wub you Auntie Margie girl Happy Easter

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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13 posted 2002-03-29 11:08 AM


*giggling* oh yes...the full moon shines on high and cast beams of love on every one...I love it....I love it....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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14 posted 2002-03-29 11:44 AM


Every month, I look forward to the full moon gracing the sky with beauty... from the fat yellow-orange of rising till the brilliant white in dead of night. *S* Equal anticipation is given for the beautiful description I know your pen will offer. *S* This is beautiful, Marge.
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15 posted 2002-03-30 10:30 PM


Krissy~
You delight my day ... and my night~
Thank you for being such a sweetheart~

StarTime~
I sure enjoy sharing these 'moonie moments' with you gal~

SuthernGal~
Ahhhhhhhhhh, shucks gal .... you're gonna get all kind of brownie points for that one~
LOVE YOU~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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