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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-26 07:00 PM


Destiny
By: Noah Eaton
3/26/02

Joanna, you're so irresistable
With you everything seems possible
Before there was this decrepitude
I was a desert rose that never bloomed
All my thoughts were rondeaus without a refrain
I tried to reform but I was defamed
Now you've composed to me a crystal melody
One that I can relate to and lend my lips to sing

I knew I loved you
Did you know you'd love me?
God has a plan for you and me
I believe he wanted us to be
I want to make you mine forever
For destiny...

I'm not sure how I made it this far
It makes no difference to me, I take it for a star
There was this darkness I had to pierce
It permeated through me, had me bursting with fears
You to me are like a Hallmark card that's timeless
You are the rose that bookmarks my chapters, you are my vignette
Every day with you is like Christmas, and you're the chandeliers hanging from the ceiling
To you I sing this betrothal, I want you to know what I have been feeling

I knew I loved you
Did you know you'd love me?
God has a plan for you and me
I believe he wanted us to be
I want to make you mine forever
For destiny...
I knew I loved you
Did you know you'd love me?
God has a plan for you and me
I believe he wanted us to be
I want to make you mine forever
For destiny...

Joanna, I will love you
For destiny...
You and me are two doves
Sharing loves golden nest...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-26-2002 07:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-26 08:25 PM


Another wonderful poem from you!
This beauty belongs at the top! I believe in destiny, so I hope you never lose faith in it! (hugs) You are my speedy eaton, LoL

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-03-26 11:07 PM


From the mists to the stars my friend...
Good work!...ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-03-26 11:20 PM


Noah~

Destiny, is a great place to be in....so oping it all works for the two of you....


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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