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Going Bonkers.... (Duet with Marsha) OR...should I say DUEL vs DUET)
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Going Bonkers.... (Duet with Marsha) OR...should I say DUEL vs DUET) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Magnus darling boy please tell me Just what are you trying to do? You make my writing look so passé You'll be sorry when I get through Mushy, Mushy..you’re so smushy why can’t you simply let it go Your words delight, oh dear Mushy We truly do love all of them so. Magnus darling boy I warned you Why don't you stop this conspiracy? I explained the penalties to you Do you not quite understand me? Remember dear that I am now old and words don’t always stay in mind I can only write of knights ever bold My pen and quill are so hard to find Magnus darling boy I'm coming You'd better run and try to hide I'm ready and I'm not funning Just forget your manly pride Oh me, oh my....surely I'll die If I can’t write the words you see of men and maids who cry and sigh Well, it simply just ain’t...my poetry [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-26-2002 06:16 PM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
"Just ain't?" Good! Marsha bubbles up her brew for those of her who like her stew Magnus wields a pen like blade for the Lady he would save and others come to visit then, a bubbling Marsha upon Knight's glen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Promised myself I wasn't gonna do this ! Smacked myself and said 'NO ... DON'T !" BUT ... it's just too good to resist~ 'Magnus darling boy I'm coming !' 'nuff said !  ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ha! You two! I love it! Nan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A good way to go bonkers if you ask me *s Bet it was fun to do.. hugss M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh please Marge....two against one old man is not fair.....gosh, where is my pen? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This was utterly utterly fun!!! Thanx Nan.. oooops...now she has me using her words... Darn, darn, darn, gotta stop that... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ...I think...instead of the Revolutionary War...this is the evolutionary war....where Marsha evolves into a poet....quite a good one...but sssssh, don't tell her I said it.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yep Yep M. This darling boy is gonna win over the utterly awesome lady......I have my helmet on...and she can't bonk me!!!! Even if she tippytoes in....I have guard dogs watching for her now... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this was so cute..i loved it hugss..great job you two  ~Victoria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, safe are you? Are you quite sure you’re safe? Because I’m not certain you are safe at all..... Don’t look behind you, or rather do Mushy is coming, coming after you Here I’m creeping, creeping to your door Watch it buster as you fall on the floor Try to hide darling, darling hide away But I’m coming deary I’ll get you someday Watch it kid as I said Your move Thanks darling boy it was fun, but that still doesn’t let you off the hook As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh...the idle threats of a woman that fall on the ears of a knight From over there across the ocean Such a pity, yearning to fight. Your toes are small and delicate but shod in shoes so very loud Your poetic attempt to instigate surely, for this you're not proud. My pen, my sword and shield protect me from the utterance of thy word My dogs will sniff out you, detect as you sing away like a lost bird. So, darling girl, give up the fight and put away that bonker you keep. It is gonna be a long hard flight so you better get some utterly sleep! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Victoria.....and the games continue.. but I am not afraid....for I have my own minions that will support me....Count them, one, two...........come on guys!!!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy You think I’m not coming, coming after you? You’ll be very sorry when this day is through Your head will have such a bump oh deary me And I will say oy g’vnor it surely wasn’t me I’ll be behind you darling boy watch out watch out there’s a Mushy about hehehehehe  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH..the fright within my eyes as you fly across blue skies I hide behind this helmet well in a place which I won't tell I changed my name and identity I cut the phone off completely I didn't give the dogs a treat cause Mushy will taste so sweet Your bonk is harmless to the fly and simply won't cause me to cry I think I have a surprise for you So..come on down, I is waitin too! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friends, you two are sooooo much fun and delightful to these boards, your words always spell such fire and enchantment to these pages! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friends, I LOVE IT!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
too cute for words!!!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Okay you two...no more feuding! Fun write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh you two! What a fun read tonight! You two duet so well together. Enjoyed much! Hugs to you both! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
the knight and the nutcase! Now THAT'S a duel!!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a cute dueling duet you two have going on here. A nice blend. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I would like to take a moment to say THANX to all of you!! And.... I would like to tell Mushy thanx for letting me have the honor of the moment...It has utterly been a blast.... Also...Mush...have you given up yet????? Come on Darling girl, throw in the towel!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Surrender? You think that I’ll surrender to you? Darling boy this isn’t over wait till I get through Surrender darling boy kneel down and pray Because darling boy its time for you to pay I warned you darling boy you know that I did You’ve had your chance to get yourself hid But its too late I’m coming, coming after you So tell me darling what are you gonna do Surrender darling yield the duel to me It’s clear that I won I claim this, my victory Have you waved the white flag yet?  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha sweet sis of mine and Magnus, this was very funny and provided me with some much needed laughs and smiles! i thank you both! each of you has an amazing talent, that looks wonderful when written together! congrats! take care. love you sis. amy "you can't stop |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'all done having fun yet? [Oops! Duck! Incoming!] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
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