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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-26 11:57 AM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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1 posted 2002-03-26 12:02 PM


Bravo!
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2 posted 2002-03-26 12:06 PM


CPatHair~
Thank you sincerely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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3 posted 2002-03-26 12:21 PM


This is simply beautiful, Marge! It sure looks like Monterrey or Big Sur, and I miss that coastline!
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4 posted 2002-03-26 12:27 PM


Marge this is beautiful. How did you do that?? Writing on the picture? Boy I have  lot to learn.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-03-26 12:40 PM


This is one to send to someone special... just cause. *S* Beautiful!
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6 posted 2002-03-26 12:54 PM


Marge,
Love it and you.

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7 posted 2002-03-26 01:39 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is outstanding writing, as always you excel at whatever you write. Fabulous writing and this is so descriptive so vivid in its image of the night the moon and the landscape. Like a master painter you’ve sketched in the outlines and filled the canvas with vibrant life.

Utterly utterly wonderful writing YOU darling girl never disappoint. Wonderful absolutely perfect poetry


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-03-26 01:43 PM


I love it when you write about me ... ven when I'm blue
This is marvelous!

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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9 posted 2002-03-26 02:10 PM


Marge:  So hauntingly lovely!  Your talents are endless and beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-03-26 02:33 PM


MidniteSun~
Thanks, hon.
I think it's the coastline of a lonely heart~
Hope you haven't been there~

CarolinaMoon~
Thanks, gal ... I try to learn a little new something each day~

SuthernGal~
... Just 'cause' you're special TOO~
He'll love getting it from you .. eh !
The poem ... THE POEM !
Well .... that too~

Seymour~
Awwwwww, both ?  How lucky can I get~

MarshaLove~
Let me guess ... one of your 'short' replies ?
LOL ... I LOVE YOU~

LunaTic~

When you think the shades are done
I'll always find the time
Penning you to perfection
Capturing you in my rhyme~

BettyLou~
Thank you very much my friend.
I got Ron's Easter Card in the mail today ...
give him a big *hug* from me~

Love to all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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11 posted 2002-03-26 03:43 PM


But of course the POEM very innocent look *G* We want to keep it special, right? No need for running shoes? *G*
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12 posted 2002-03-26 03:56 PM


the lagoon of night
can never lose pools of you
it could not exist

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2002-03-27 10:15 AM


So soft & touching this is, Marge....
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14 posted 2002-03-27 10:52 AM


SuthernGal~
Of course~

InterLoper~
You always leave a trail of soft sighing smiles~

Amigo~
Thanks, hon ... this one kind of likes me too~
And my honey inspired it ... and he likes it too~
One night apart is just too long~
*Hugs* to all~

And Bill ... I love you foreverly~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-03-27 04:52 PM


loved it
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16 posted 2002-03-27 08:22 PM


Just beautiful, Marge! I hope someday I can write as good as you do.
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17 posted 2002-03-28 10:08 AM


Beautiful as always Marge

((hugs))
Charisma

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18 posted 2002-03-28 04:34 PM


oh! this is very awesome miss margie..!!  and what a cool pic too!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"anger is nothing more than unfulfilled desire.."  -unknown

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19 posted 2002-03-28 06:21 PM


Wow. That's all I can say. Just Wow.

Nan

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20 posted 2002-03-28 09:44 PM


VanDana~
Thank you gal~

SmartChick~
Awwwwwwww .... you do just fine yourself poetess !
NOW .. write me another series of Haiku or perhaps a Tanka ! !

Charisma~
My dearest friend ... thank you~
I'm sending a special Easter hug your way~

DG~
Shucks gal .... I'm glad you like it~

Pilgrimage~
Thanks ... all I can say is Thanks !
LOL ... I do appreciate your WOW's~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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