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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
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kent England

0 posted 2002-03-26 11:05 AM


I Sigh

Sigh of eyes caress
Brush softly gently in me
Touch the heart of me


Krissy



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2002-03-26 11:06 AM


sweet sis/niece,

this is such beautiful writing!
has such a tender soft flow about it
and made me smile. thank you for posting
such a lovely gem!

take care. love you.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2002-03-26 11:19 AM



This is so pretty and dreamy!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
3 posted 2002-03-26 11:56 AM


This is so pretty.

Nan

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-03-26 12:22 PM


Krissy~

In softest blinking
Lash of eye in mascara
Flitting fluttered flirt~


*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-03-26 12:32 PM


Krissy,
Good on enjoyed the read.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
6 posted 2002-03-26 12:35 PM


soft senyru...specific to the count

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-03-26 10:16 PM




(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with love and beauty! (kiss on cheek) May love forever sing to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer
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8 posted 2002-03-26 11:04 PM


Look at this!! From a complete non-poet to a senyru creator in no time flat! Impressive!!!!
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2002-03-27 05:00 AM


Krissy,
look at this my little poet all grown up. *Sob*
Kethp

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2002-03-27 09:56 AM



Answer one question ~
what don't you do very well?
I am listening

RosePetal
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11 posted 2002-03-27 03:51 PM


*SIGH*

Lovely senryu my friend

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-03-27 05:03 PM


touch the heart of me
your sighs echo in my heart
my sighs fill your ear

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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